Congratulations!
way to go pal, theres a new world ahead and you stepped in with the right foot.
of course theres graphic issues but worked for me, besides that its the idea development: most ppl will understand why the guy is bleeding, but for the sake of your movie and the other amount of ppl you should make you point clearer. you can follow the anime example where all the actions are explained no matter how obvious they are: "whats his power level vegeta"?